This issue takes place in mid-December in Nebraska. The weather is COLD, so clothing and outdoor scenes should reflect this.
Narration in this issue is in the form of DON'S MISSION REPORT and narrative captions will be marked as such.
A outdoor scene of bare, rolling fields broken by lines of leafless trees. It's daylight and the sky is overcast with dark clouds. In the centre of the scene is the only sign of civilization for miles around, a large farmhouse with a couple of outbuildings. There are trees, hedges, fences and ditches in the immediate vicinity of the farm -- sufficient to provide cover should any kind of fight develop. (Not wanting to ruin the suspense, but there's going to be a fight and DON is going to need some cover.) There is no sign that this is a "working" farm -- no livestock, no machinery, etc. A dirt road snakes in towards the buildings, ending in the yard between the farmhouse and the barn. There is a car on the road, in the distance, approaching the house. It's the car DON was driving when last seen in ISSUE 45.
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The car comes to a halt in the farmyard.
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DON is sitting in the car, looking out at the farmhouse. He's dressed as usual in his battered old leather flying jacket.
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DON is out of the car and walking towards the house. His jacket is zipped up high and his hands are tucked in the pockets. He's walking casually, evidently not expecting trouble.
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DON is on the porch, by the front door. We can clearly see (as can he) that the front door is slightly ajar.
No dialogue.
DON has his gun in his hand and is cautiously pushing the door open.
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DON is in the open doorway, using it for cover while he looks around the room. He's poised and alert -- remember, he's an old pro at this. His gun is held in two hands but pointing down.
The room is a spacious living area, well furnished, lots of "rustic" wood panelling, but fitted out with a big music system and wide-screen TV. No evidence that anybody is currently here. A pile of mail is on the doormat (though this may not be evident in this view). Stairs lead to the upper storey and doors lead into other rooms. There is a door under the stairs -- this leads down to the cellar, though this wouldn't yet be obvious to the reader.
No dialogue.
DON is crouching in the doorway. His gun is in one hand and one of the envelopes in the other hand. He looks at the letter.
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Same crouching posture. He is running his hand over the door frame, which has been splintered where the lock should be.
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He is at the bottom of the stairs, wall at his back, gun still ready.
No dialogue.
DON is now at the top of the stairs. A small landing with two doors standing open.
No dialogue.
DON is coming down the stairs again. Not being so cautious now, but still with his gun in his hand.
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DON is now at the bottom of the stairs and looking at the door to the cellar steps. He (and we) can now see that its lock has been forced open.
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DON has the cellar door open and is standing at the top of the stairs, looking down into darkness.
No dialogue.
Close-up of DON's hand flipping a light switch.
No dialogue.
DON is walking down the (lighted) stairs. His gun is still out and ready.
DON stands at the foot of the cellar stairs. Big panel to show the cellar. It's a spacious area and furnished as a laboratory. Various items of equipment on benches could be centrifuges, mass spectrometers, etc. There are shelves of glassware and bottles of chemicals. One complete wall is devoted to bookcases with textbooks and bound journals. Another wall has metal filing cabinets. One table holds a computer which has been torn open, its guts spilling over the bench.
No dialogue.
DON is at the bench with the computer, looking at the wreckage.
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DON looks around the room. (He is actually speaking out loud in this panel -- it's not a mistake.)
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DON is now by the bookshelves. This view doesn't let the reader read any of the titles on the spines of the books.
1. DON:
We now get a close-up of part of the bookshelf. DON is reading the spines of the tightly-packed text books, and we can plainly see their titles:
STANDARD POLYMERASE REACTIONS
ENDOCHRONIC PROPERTIES 3rd EDITION
NUCLEOTIDE CHEMISTRY
THE MAGIC OF BARRY MANILOW
COMPENDIUM OF ORGANIC REAGENTS
COMMON MUTATIONS OF BASE PAIRS
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4. DON:
Close-up on DON's hand tipping the "Manilow" book forward on the shelf.
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DON watches as a section of bookcase swings open, revealing a small recess in the wall.
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DON is reaching into the recess and taking out a bundle of discs.
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DON is placing the bundle inside his jacket.
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DON looks around the room while zipping up his jacket.
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Close up on DON, head on one side as if listening.
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Same view, DON now looking very alarmed.
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Close-up of the side weapon mount of a Marine Corps AH-1W SuperCobra attack helicopter. We don't need to show the full chopper in this view, just the fact that it is armed with missiles -- one of which is being launched (actually two are being launched but the other one will be from the other side of the chopper).
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12. SFX (missile):
Big splash panel of the house being struck by a pair of air-to-ground missiles. It is exploding into a huge fireball.
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Complete change of scene now, as we show what our regular cast is getting up to. It's not anything important, but putting it here will heighten the tension over whether DON has survived the attack. (Oh, I'm so transparently devious.)
Anyway, it's Central Park in New York. JAMES and SARA, both dressed for cold weather, are walking along a wooded path. Their breath steams as they talk.
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They have reached the end of the path, which opens out onto a large expanse of grass. We can't see what they see, yet, as we concentrate on their reactions -- JAMES is obviously surprised.
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We can now see what they see -- in the centre of the field is a mass of construction activity as people assemble a huge marquee. In the foreground we can see a sign with some familiar text:
TEMPLE OF UNITY
HELP FOR BODY AND MIND
ALL WELCOME
FREE FOOD SERVED: 8PM
No dialogue.
In a hotel room, JAMES is holding a flyer out for the rest of the group to inspect -- they are all here, JAMES, SARA, PAUL, FRED and WANE.
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2. JAMES:
Close-up on SARA.
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4. FRED (off-panel):
Everyone turns to look at FRED, who looks disgusted.
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6. SARA:
FRED holds up an envelope.
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They all look at him with "so what?" expressions.
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We are back in Nebraska. A young private in Marine Corps uniform, armed with a short-barrel HK416 carbine (held at the ready), walks slowly towards the burning wreck of the farm building. It's the K-MAN DRAKE, last seen in ISSUE 44. He wears a radio ear-piece (not greatly obvious, but relevant because we'll have a caption coming from it). He is skirting a thick hedge that forms a field boundary.
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DRAKE stops with his back to the hedge, only about a foot away from it, looking at the building. He now holds his carbine casually over one shoulder.
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A pair of hands reaches out of the hedge behind him. From what little we can see, the arms seem to be dressed in a familiar leather jacket.
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The hands grab DRAKE. One hand holds his gun arm, the other is round his neck. He is being pulled back into the hedge.
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Same POV -- there is no sign of DRAKE.
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Identical panel. No sign of anybody.
No dialogue.
Another marine, identically armed and equipped. This is another K-MAN, ROBERT WEAVER. He is viewing the wreckage from another angle.
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We see WEAVER from a different POV -- low-down and through grass. As if we're hiding in a ditch or something. WEAVER is very close to our POV but not looking our way.
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DON has burst out of cover and crashed into WEAVER with a low tackle, knocking the marine off balance.
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DON and WEAVER tumble over the ground. WEAVER's firearm is flying clear.
No dialogue.
WEAVER is flat on his back. DON is astride his chest, a knee planted on each arm, effectively pinning WEAVER to the ground. DON's gun is out and pressed against WEAVER's forehead.
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Same positions. WEAVER looks more angry than worried.
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Close-up on DON's grim face. You really believe he could pull the trigger with a wrong answer.
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6. WEAVER (off-panel):
Close-up on WEAVER's face, looking genuinely puzzled.
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Same view. WEAVER's head hasn't moved but his eyes are looking off to one side.
No dialogue.
A second K-MAN -- this one in wolf form -- is crashing into DON from the side, knocking him clear of WEAVER.
No dialogue.
DON is on his knees and the K-MAN is in a crouch. They face one another. DON is raising his gun to point at the K-MAN.
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Before DON can shoot or even rise to his feet, the K-MAN has lashed out with a hand (paw) and sent the gun flying from his grip.
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DON is on his feet, facing the crouching K-MAN who beckons him with a come-and-get-it gesture. DON's left hand is a fist but he's holding his right (gun) arm oddly, as if it's injured.
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DON and the K-Man both look towards the off-panel speaker.
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Big panel to show the K-MAN being hit by a huge blast of pellets coming from the direction of the off-panel speaker. The force is hurling him away.
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We see the speaker for the first time -- and it's SEBASTIAN MAKEPEACE, last seen popping up in ISSUE #46. He's holding his huge polar-bear-hunting shotgun, and it's smoking.
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DON is looking incredulously at MAKEPEACE. Behind MAKEPEACE, we see that WEAVER is rising to his feet -- and in the first stages of changing to wolf form (though still more human than wolf).
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MAKEPEACE has turned and clubbed the mostly-human WEAVER with the stock of his shotgun. WEAVER goes down.
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DON is picking up his gun (left-handed).
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MAKEPEACE is standing over the body of the K-MAN he shot and poking it with his foot. The K-MAN is unconscious and though there is blood from the shotgun wounds there is not as much as you might expect.
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MAKEPEACE is backing away from the downed K-MAN, towards DON, his gun covering the K-MAN.
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The pair of them run past the burning building. In passing we should show that DON's car is also burning -- collateral damage, presumably. (It's necessary to establish that they can't just drive away.)
No dialogue.
DON and MAKEPEACE crouch in the cover of some bushes, looking out. Smoke drifts across them.
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They look at each other.
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Through the smoke, they watch a pair of armed K-MEN (in wolf form) walking in their rough direction.
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8. DON (softly):
They both watch as the two K-MEN walk past them. The K-MEN are moving as if search, sniffing the air. But they show no sign of spotting the concealed men.
No dialogue.
DON and MAKEPEACE watch the K-MEN moving away.
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DON is looking up into the sky.
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Now they both look up.
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8. MAKEPEACE:
In a long distance view of the area, we see the helicopter circling at low altitude. MAKEPEACE's caption will come from the area of cover they are hiding in -- we can't see the men in this view, of course.
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Back to the men in the hiding place. MAKEPEACE is now looking at DON. DON still watches the sky.
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11. DON:
DON looks back at MAKEPEACE in horror.
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The helicopter is flying fast and straight away from the scene.
1. VOICE (from cockpit):
We now see into the cockpit, and DON and MAKEPEACE are flying it. (To be specific, DON is flying it. MAKEPEACE is just along for the ride. The helicopter has two seats, one behind and slightly above the other, and it's the pilot who sits in the rear seat.)
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Another exterior view sees the chopper racing into the distance.
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The chopper recedes into a distant speck.
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The small, shabby apartment of MIKE DOYLE. DOYLE is there, seated on the bed, leaning against the headboard. He's staring moodily into space. A large glass of whiskey is in his hand. A half-empty bottle is on the nightstand, next to a phone.
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Same scene. DOYLE throws back his drink in one mouthful.
No dialogue.
DOYLE puts the empty glass down next to the bottle.
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DOYLE is speaking into the phone.
3. DOYLE:
Close up of DOYLE.
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Next: The Cage
© 2008 by David Meadows